The Tin Soldier's Quest for Love

Bugs: 

(As mentioned in another comment) Main character can avoid the platforms by walking straight-forwards and still win the game. (This makes the platforms lose their purpose)

Strengths: 

Art-style is colourful and undetailed which suits the (presumably) toy-like style of the game.

Game includes a sound effect for jumping to make the game more interactive.

Background is detailed and uses darkness and lightness to simulate a 3-dimensional environment.

Weaknesses: 

Game is very short and has very few mechanics

Changes or Improvements: 

increase the number and height of the platforms, add more parts to the game (there are currently only 2 platforms, maybe make more and/or a mechanic where if the soldier misses a jump and falls down, they have to restart the level)

Bugs: you can complete the game by just walking forwards instead of having to actually jump on the platforms

strengths: I like the colours in the game and the simplicity

weaknesses: the game is short 

changes: maybe add some more platforms to extend the game.

bugs - no bugs i can see

strengths - art is colourful

weaknesses - game is very short

changes - add some more